Sunday 26 January 2014

The Story of a toy robot


"Come on, you can do it! Knock him down!". A boy shouted. Another boy shouted the same thing back. The two friends are playing with their toy robots, making them fight with each other. "Oh, stop it! my arms and legs hurts" and "not my head again!". I yelled and cried in pain but the boys just would not stop. Yes, you guessed it! I am a toy robot.

My name is MFB3-21. I am blue, red and yellow in color with strong arms and legs. I look so cool and I am proud of myself. I was manufactured in USA, shipped to Singapore and I was placed together with the other robots in a toy shop. One afternoon, while most of the robots were taking a nap, the door flung opened with a big bang and a crowd of children rushed in and gathered around the shelf where the robots were displayed. I was chosen by a short boy, whose name is James. From their conversion, I knew he loves robots and I was excited to meet the other robots that he owned.

When I was brought home, all the other robots greeted me happily. I felt so excited and greeted them back and I thought I could live happily ever after. My happiness faded when James packed me into his bag and brought me to his friend's house. Oh no! They used their toy robots to battle. As I was new and strong, I had won a few battles and James boast a lot about me. One day, I lost in a battle and broke my arm. 

When he reached home, he cried that I broke my arm said that I could not be used anymore.  His mother told him to ask his older cousin if I could be fixed  There, I was fixed by his cousin and was able to move my arm again but James did not want me back. I felt so angry and sad.  

Soon after, I felt happy again. Do you want to know why? That's because his older cousin, Ken takes good care of me! 

So that's the story of a toy robot!

Monday 20 January 2014

Name : Lim Bo Yu, Jeff
Class  : 1E1
Date  : 20 January 2014
Draft 3 :Intro+Concluding

Story of A File

Hello! I am a A4-size ring file and I am blue in colour. Last year, I was in a book shop full of stationery. There were pens, pencils, rulers and files like me. One afternoon, a boy who saw me on the shelf and he asked his mother "Mum, can you buy me this file? My English teacher told us to get a blue file for English lessons."  The boy's mother nodded her head and the boy cried in delight. After they made their payment, I was put into a plastic bag and followed the boy home.When the boy was home, he immediately pulled me out of the bag and wrote his name and class on me. After writing, I know his name is James and he is 8 years old. He put me into his school bag and brought me to school the following day. He used me for few years and took great care of me until one day, he accidentally dropped me onto the floor and one of my rings was broken.  He then threw me into the trash bag. An old man passed by and picked me up. He brought me home, replaced my broken ring and cleaned me. After cleaning, he gave me to his grandson and told him made good use of me. My new owner took care of me. I am glad that I am useful again!
Name : Lim Bo Yu, Jeff
Class : 1E1
Date  : 20 January 2014
Draft 2: Paragraphing

Story of A File
  
          Hello! I am a A4-size ring file and I am blue in colour. Last year, I was in a book shop full of stationery. There were pens, pencils, rulers and files like me. One afternoon, a boy who saw me on the shelf and he asked his mother "Mum, can you buy me this file? My English teacher told us to get a blue file for English lessons."  The boy's mother nodded her head and the boy cried in delight. After they made their payment, I was put into a plastic bag and followed the boy home.
         When the boy was home, he immediately pulled me out of the bag and wrote his name and class on me. After writing, I know his name is James and he is 8 years old. He put me into his school bag and brought me to school the following day. He used me for few years and took great care of me until one day, he accidentally dropped me onto the floor and one of my rings was broken.  He then threw me into the trash bag.
           An old man passed by and picked me up. He brought me home, replaced my broken ring and cleaned me. After cleaning, he gave me to his grandson and told him made good use of me. My new owner took care of me. I am glad that I am useful again!

Name : Lim Bo Yu, Jeff
Class  : 1E1
Date  : 20 January 2014
Draft 1 : Content

Story of A File

Hello! I am a A4-size ring file and I am blue in colour. Last year, I was in a book shop full of stationery. There were pens, pencils, rulers and files like me. One afternoon, a boy who saw me on the shelf and he asked his mother "Mum, can you buy me this file? My English teacher told us to get a blue file for English lessons."  The boy's mother nodded her head and the boy cried in delight. After they made their payment, I was put into a plastic bag and followed the boy home.When the boy was home, he immediately pulled me out of the bag and wrote his name and class on me. After writing, I know his name is James and he is 8 years old. He put me into his school bag and brought me to school the following day. He used me for few years and took great care of me until one day, he accidentally dropped me onto the floor and one of my rings was broken.  He then threw me into the trash bag. An old man passed by and picked me up. He brought me home, replaced my broken ring and cleaned me. After cleaning, he gave me to his grandson and told him made good use of me. My new owner took care of me. I am glad that I am useful again! 






Tuesday 14 January 2014

         Hello! My name is Jeff.  I am from 1E1/Perseverance 1 at CHONG BOON Secondary School.
          Firstly, I will talk about myself starting with Hobbies.  My hobbies are playing games on the computer, reading books and sleeping.  I love any COLOUR and any food except for Seafood.  Something interesting about myself is that I really can talk a lot but other people says that I am annoying.  My best friend in my primary school is Garren and I still have his telephone number. Although he is not in the same secondary school with me, I will keep in touch with him.
         Well...life in my primary school was not easy but I had many friends and the teachers were helpful and very patient. My favorite teachers are Miss Loy, Miss Lisa and Mr Goh. My favorite subject is Mathematics.
          Now, I am in Chong Boon Secondary School, totally new and alone BUT not for long! I will make new friends and meet new teachers. I will take on new challenges and BE A BETTER PERSON!!!